The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.
Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.
In this day and age, child obesity has become an alarming phenomenon in Western countries. The rate of overweight children has been elevated by close to 20% in these nations in a decade. this essay will take a closer look at the causes before examining the negative ramifications it brings.
There are two ubiquitous reasons for the rising levels of overweight children that have been recognized. Firstly, processed food, which children nowadays tend to consume too much, leads them to gain weight quickly as they are very extremely high in fat and sugar but low in vitamins and fiber. Another factor to consider is that children lead a sedentary lifestyle. To be more specific, they spend a huge amount of time watching TV, playing games, or surfing the internet instead of playing sports or going outside. The lack of physical exercise, as a result, they cannot burn off excess calories, getting obese is almost inevitable.
obesity poses the potential risk of various physical and psychological problems among children. To begin with, overweight children are prone to some dangerous diseases, especially diabetes. children who suffer from this debilitating illness means they have to be injected with insulin for the rest of their life. Furthermore, getting obese works as a contributor factor to
experiencing low self-esteem in children’s life. In the other words, overweight children cannot stop comparing themselves to others and feel unconfident. Even worse, these children have suffered from depression or social anxiety disorder, which is a big barrier to them having a comprehensive development.
In conclusion, children gain weight too much and get obese due to improper diet and sedentary lifestyles. Additionally, obesity produces a harmful influence on children's lives.
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten year Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 84
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten year Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 84
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten years Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 84
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten year Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48754448399 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90386661743 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654804270463 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4676066851 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163038498458 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550970212025 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304071025646 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926169521721 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399928822702 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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