Some people think that employers should not be concerned about how employees dress at work, but the quality of work only. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that executives should ignore dress codes in the workplace, and productivity should be their main concern. I thoroughly disagree with this notion due to the following reasons.
Dress policies are inevitable in some businesses as they have to follow protection guidelines or social norms. There are several occupations that require special uniforms to protect staff from potentially hazardous situations since they work in harsh physical conditions, such as the threat of fire and detrimental smoke for firefighters or chemistry engineers involved with toxic chemicals. It is therefore undeniable that if employers do not provide staffs with equipped uniforms, this harmful condition will harm employees' health, bringing about a decrease in employees' efficiency. In addition, businesses should follow the norms and legislations of the society in which they survive. As a result, if they act against the law, they will be penalized by legislators. Take Iran as an example of an Islamic country, It is illegal for Iranian women not to wear the scarf, and employers must develop clothing guidelines for their offices to ensure that this law is obeyed.
Compulsion aside, I hold the view that professional dressing would positively influence customers' perceptions. The style of dress conveys a sense of trust and confidence to customers since employees who are formally dressed are inclined toward treating more politely and professionally. This behavior creates a good image in customers' mind. Moreover, an excellent first impression is vital to client-facing corporations because should employees be dressed smartly and properly, then they will create a positive image in a client's mind that makes him feel comfortable. While other companies are expending an exorbitant amount of money to acquire and retain customers, a company caring about dress codes can achieve this by following simple clothing-related rules.
In conclusion, I disagree with the notion that high-level managers should not take dress policies as their priorities, while not only is it a must in dangerous working environments, but also it can positively influence customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54380664653 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03584942671 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610271903323 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.038216332 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.071428571 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216813790759 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669713757802 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562862354339 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140640800574 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376564994018 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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