More and more people are seriously overweight. Some people suggest the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
obesity is becoming common occurrence between people in modern life. While some people believe that increasing the cost of product high in fat reduce fatness, I am convinced that making sport facilities available for those who are obese is the best solution.
It is evident that reduced cost of fattening food can sometimes keep people from obesity. However, attracting people's minds and interests to any kind of sport may has a positive influence. because sport helps people to get in shape increasing the speed of blood circulation and replace fat tissue come from foods into muscle tissues. for instance, people who do sport on daily basis have tendency to be more healthy and in shape rather than those who cut off the portion of food eaten.
On the other hand reducing private cars can be more productive way to avoid obesity. Nowadays there are a lot of people who own car which causes inactive lifestyle. And also because of inactive lifestyle they tend to gain weight easily, by putting some restrictions on private cars we can make people more active as the result they can deal with the obesity without rising the products high in fat
In conclusion, I believe that rising the cost of fattening food is not the main option to prevent people from obesity
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89400921659 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40894402571 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.3747006213 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234504045383 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996671208405 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328912438604 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143264123385 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378917918089 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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