The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Can the well-being of citizen of a country be a true measure of the effectiveness of the country’s leader? This question is often debated heatedly in the political circles with some supporting the notion and some condescending it. I believe that, a person emerges as a leader when the aspirations of the people are reverberating with his vision and hence the citizen’s status help determine the effectiveness of the leader
In India, during 1998-99 there was a new government led by Atal Bihari Vajpayee, that was concentrating only on building infrastructure. New projects worth millions, being built rapidly and seemingly transformed the entire country’s infrastructure for the better. He firmly believed that better infrastructure can bring faster economic development. And his steadfast vision on making Indian an economic supergiant flourished as India soon became one of the fastest growing large economies in the world till date since 2013. Indian economy since then has tripled and to this date all the major economists ascribe this progress to Atal. Citizens as a result had access to better roads, hospitals and rail infrastructure which increased the quality of life significantly and also had better incomes than ever before.
It is also true that country’s leader cannot alone ensure the well-being of the citizen. We live in an increasingly connected world and the effect on one country can create ripples that affect everyone. Today Russia is waging a war against Ukraine, this has led to serious problems for the Ukrainian citizens. The deaths are ever increasing, and general necessities have turned into luxuries. Now as the citizens do not have a comfortable life are they despising their president? The answer would be no since the people still look up to him for hope. They are drawing inspiration from his speeches to resist the forces working against them. Proving further that a leader needs to provide his citizens with hope and aspirations to grow and not only provide amenities to develop their health and economic status.
An effective leader can not only change the lives of his country’s citizen but can also change the perception the world holds against them. In India, people were always regarded as third world citizens who are illiterate and teaming with diseases. Over the course of years, Prime Ministers like Indira Gandhi completely wiped this perception out by strategically winning a few wars against the super economies and proved that the Indian arms and technology was capable and potent enough to sustain India. This led to new found respect for Indians across the globe.
It is true that many other factors determine the well being of the people of the country, but by the far the most impact is created by the effectiveness of the leader. An able leader can change the fae of a country from Good to Worse or vice-versa based on the vision he carries for the betterment of the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 501, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, still, then, third, well, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2470.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10330578512 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80491168138 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54132231405 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1557128881 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.272727273 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68181818182 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208324032972 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656321133632 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805757623241 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132307192126 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627500511083 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.