Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is the opinion about this ?
It is argued by some that the place where one works or lives should be clean and organized. Many might think otherwise, while according to me, one should keep his space clean and in order.
Firstly, by adopting this approach one can avoid wastage of time on searching for various daily use items. If everything is in its particular place, there is no need to wander here and there for small items. As an outcome, one will be able to complete his duties on time and achieve planned targets. For instance, managers of international companies have allocated separate cabinets for office files, so whenever they need one, they can grab it instantly. Same goes for a housewife, if she has organized the spices well, she can complete her cooking within a short period of time.
Secondly, tidy as well as managed workplaces and homes give a positive first impression either to the guests or the clients. This results in a good reputation among relatives and in market. Organizations can also have a boost in their sales by giving a strong first impression. Take an example of a multinational corporation Apple, because they are among the most organized and tidy workspaces of the world, their clients are really impressed. Hence, untidy places always give a negative impression.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that any place where you are living or working should be well organized because it will not only save your time for other important tasks but also portray a positive image among guests or clients.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much might', 'a good deal of might'.
Suggestion: Much might; A good deal of might
...or lives should be clean and organized. Many might think otherwise, while according to me,...
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Line 2, column 565, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...can complete her cooking within a short period of time. Secondly, tidy as well as managed wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86821705426 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62796414381 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1657041172 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6153846154 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12217956219 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409724714391 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372533277696 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731656706129 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303560116727 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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