The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently Later you discovered some defects in repairs Write a letter to your landlord

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The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently. Later you discovered some defects in repairs. Write a letter to your landlord.

Dear Mr. Shah,

I am Dhaivat Suthar, a tenant of your Lakeview side apartment. First of all, I want to thank you for the repairs which you have arranged last week before I moved in. However, I am writing this letter to inform you about a few pressing issues with the appliances. They are impacting majorly in my day-to-day life and I request your support in rectifying them.

To begin with, the majority of the appliances are working well baring the washing machine and oven. I have observed a continuous water leakage from the back and it gets higher while washing at full load. In the case oven, It is not heating up properly and I reckon, the issue is with the heating coils as they don’t glow red while the oven is switched on.

As I can see, both of them look relatively new and i believe that they must be under warranty. It would be great if you can raise a formal complaint about the repairs for these two appliances.

I really appreciate your prompt action for these problems and hoping for swift repair from the company.

Yours sincerely,
Dhaivat Suthar

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e, both of them look relatively new and i believe that they must be under warrant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, well, while, i reckon, first of all, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62176165803 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38110949088 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663212435233 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.542652405 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0909090909 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198042749157 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679191739261 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692895538986 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107319189012 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079175763558 0.0580467560999 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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