You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like
say what experience and skills you have
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for a full-time job though your employment agency. I am a B.Com graduate (2021 Batch) from Mumbai University. Apart from academics I have also completed two summer internships as an accountant in leading banks.
Let me tell my expectations/requirements to you. Considering I have done my major in Accounting and Finance I am looking for an opportunity which will help me showcase my accounting skills. Additionally, if I get a customer service experience that would be a great deal for me. I am fine with travelling to up to 50 KMs to 80 KMs from my place.
Coming to my experience and skills, I have a year’s experience as a junior accountant in retail bank. I have also completed certification in Tally ERP 9, Microsoft Excel and Typing course. My theoretical knowledge and your guidance will help me improve my profile a lot.
I hope to hearing back from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Firdous Pathan
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Com
...though your employment agency. I am a B.Com graduate 2021 Batch from Mumbai Univers...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... up to 50 KMs to 80 KMs from my place. Coming to my experience and skills, I ha...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93251533742 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38481330654 2.54303337028 133% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638036809816 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8233091813 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5833333333 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209680368428 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755009899397 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887856451831 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11442413648 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450424967623 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Com
...though your employment agency. I am a B.Com graduate 2021 Batch from Mumbai Univers...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... up to 50 KMs to 80 KMs from my place. Coming to my experience and skills, I ha...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93251533742 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38481330654 2.54303337028 133% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638036809816 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8233091813 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5833333333 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209680368428 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755009899397 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887856451831 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11442413648 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450424967623 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.