You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words, they
Nowadays, the prevalence of children using smartphones is increasing for a variety of reasons, both for the attractiveness of technological development and for the parents. The effects can be extremely serious for them and the community, as we will discuss now.
With the dramatic development of technology, creating more and more websites and applications for smartphones, including vivid sound and images, and novelty content appealing to children, for example, YouTube, which includes both website types and application types, attracted over a million children’s views for just a children’s song. Besides, parents in this busy world must spend most of their time at work and less time with their family. As a result, when a child does not coordinate with them in daily tasks, they just use their smartphone as a tool to force their child to obey. Therefore, children are becoming more reliant on smartphones.
Turning to the effects of this trend, the most serious threat is to children’s health. Due to spending too much time on smartphones, they may have less time for outdoor activities, which will lead to a sedentary lifestyle. This is the major cause of children’s health problems, such as being overweight or even obese. In addition, there are various games on smartphones. If they are not supervised by their parents, they can become involved in negative games such as violent games. This could lead to problems ranging from skipping school to breaking the law, which will make the community less safe.
In conclusion, the factors behind the phenomenon of children spending many hours on smartphones tend to be technological growth and the children’s parents. The effects may include the children themselves and their community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31899641577 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97414162887 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.031233688 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212177288993 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725145688136 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400722865727 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132612710642 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236454298827 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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