More and more people are seriously overweight. Some people suggest the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Obesity and overweight are increasing steadily in many countries around the world. It is suggested that this problem can be solved by increasing the price of high-fat foods. I disagree with this idea because there are many more important causes of weight gain. The essay below will discuss and make additions to my point of view.
The first reason for keeping my opinion is that many young people are willing to spend large sums of money to enjoy its special taste. There is information that junk food such as pizza, hamburgers, or salty snacks causes dopamine to be produced in the body, causing appetites to grow. Consequently, they constantly want to eat it, continue to buy and consume high-fat foods that affect their health.
Additionally, obesity has become more and more prevalent among many people, not only due to eating unhealthy foods but also to sedentary lifestyles. When eating, the body stores calories and cholesterol that cannot be dissolved, creating fatty tissue that accumulates, causing weight gain. According to recent studies, even though people have a nutritious diet, inactivity still leads to obesity. Therefore, physical activity plays an essential role in maintaining a healthy and fit body.
Finally, the drastic measures to combat the obesity crisis begin with the family. It is for this reason that grandparents and parents should prepare healthy, delicious meals every single day. Adults can replace ready-to-eat meals with foods that are low in fat and sugar, and add more vegetables and fruits. In addition, family members have the opportunity to spend free time together playing outdoor activities, which will help control weight and also strengthen family bonds.
In conclusion, increasing the price of fattening food is not necessarily the ideal solution to controlling fat content in people. I believe that promoting an active lifestyle and exercising will help people lose weight.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, so, still, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32352941176 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65657331467 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650326797386 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1331485697 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.8235294118 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218900846591 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614805689464 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601704745852 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119282256598 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604910139218 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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