Doctors and Health
Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Highly controversial issue relates to aware individuals or ameliorating their health, Doctors are being considered accountable. To me medical officers on key player to educate society, however, I prefer to scrutinise both favourable and opposing view before forming a notion.
Several points are there to support my stance of why are you said Dr responsible to educate masses. The dominant one is professional degree, Drs be fully trained possessing formal degree require much knowledge about human body are you speak you in contrast to common man, who don’t know how everybody works. Therefore, how would it be possible for everyone take care without proper education? In such cases, patients approaching hospitals can be better guided by doctors. Not only does awareness encourage Society to follow diet chart prepared by Health care and other therapies but likelihood of disease will be plunged enormously. If the strategy Works
Well the world would be a better place to live away from agony.
Besides, Another aspect in this regard is that technological era has proved curse
Extreme cases as few online platforms misguide people. Indeed, Without proper examination people clear some alteration medication to be the best, consequently, catch 22 situation arises here adopting such medicines worsen the situation. A case in point is that videos have been practising since ages, but Once an amateur’s experiment What is proven deadly. There for, doctors should Take initiative for the noble cause to educate people more about their health.
However grave repetition associated with this cannot be snubbed. Actually, statistically the number of patients is rising day by day, which in turn, has put pressure on medical care. So, efforts of doctors would go in vain well ignorant people
do Not well, doctors advice.
In the gist of our discussion, despite the fact that there are couple of challenges arise while educating sometimes, it’s a duty of a doctor to be more patient and attentive for the sake of society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29012345679 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73973955688 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.716049382716 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5409728967 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.125 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352659883649 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094912256506 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958358702963 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125852023568 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741452149334 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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