All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Every company want to see itself on zenith,and a company require to be succefull, is to make
sure that its employees are happy and they are willing working for the company and not just for
the salary in 8 hours working shift.
sometimes its ok to listen the ideas from the outsiders which could be which might help company
to grow but it might not helpful always.
yes, consultants job is to help the industry to grow in a efficient way.and we see in this
interconnected world that there are many consultancies who are helping the industries not only
in a same country but internationaly too.for example we have there are many indian companies
who works as consultancies,helps banks,airlines and many other industries to improvise on their
current business.we have seen although,they might charge very high amount to provide such
facelity to the company.
but company's higher management should ask question themeselves , will these people able to
help the company for the vision , they are looking for?
isn't the employeess who would know better than anyone else.there could be chances that such
consultancies just want to make money for themeselves and provide such scenarios which might
not help the company in long term.so it is good to have to include the employees to get better
suggestions to company grow. which will give the motivation not only to the employees but
company gains the trust from its employees.
since employees have more experience in the company, and company shows the trust on them ,
then this would not only help the company but it will work as motivation for the employee where
the employee not only think or will work whatever has been asked for indeed they will put their
extra effort to get some innovative ideas which a consulatnt might not provide such.this trust
factor will help to motivate the employees to think company as their own business which they
want to grow so they will have higher vision, not necessary that comapny should listen to every
employee suggestion but company can choose the best out of peothrial recommendations.if every
employee work as CEO, then no one can stop to that company at new level like sundar pichai as
an employee suggest the idea of having their own search engine , and Google management listen
to his idea, believe on him and today whole world knows the truth the consequences of this
outcome.
So its good to have the suggestions from employees , which not only help the company to grow
but its employees also.rather than spending fee to consultancies , better to should spent on
its employees to retain and motivate them to grow which helps company also in either way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.015625 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72736414969 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459821428571 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 23.0359550562 243% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 263.720969966 60.3974514979 437% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 280.875 118.986275619 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.0 23.4991977007 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 31.0 4.97078651685 624% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346463949096 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174643461408 0.0831039109588 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485208892414 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988624286244 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608246270982 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.2 14.1392134831 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.1 48.8420337079 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 12.1743820225 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.4 11.2143820225 218% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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