You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The supplied line graph provides detailed information about how many enquiries the Tourist Information Office obtain in a city over a period of six months in the year 2011.
In general, the number of enquiries received in person and by telephone experienced upward trend whereas the opposite was true for collecting by letter/email throughout the given period. Despite having the lowest number of enquiries in the first two months, receiving in person outraced others in the end of the period.
Looking more into details, from January to February, while the amount of enquiries received in person was the lowest compared to two others with the figure of just over 400, it grew considerably instead of dropping like others. In March, it led the first position with approximately 1200 and then reached a peak at about 1900 in June. In spite of some fluctuations in the initial months of the period, number of enquiries received by telephone, which started at 900, became the second highest with 1600 in June.
In contrast, the number of enquiries received by letter/email declined significantly. The number was just under 800 in the first three months, but fell sharply to about 400 in May. However, over the rest of the period given, it remained fairly stable at that level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Office) must be used with a third-person verb: 'obtains'.
Suggestion: obtains
...nquiries the Tourist Information Office obtain in a city over a period of six months i...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he second highest with 1600 in June. In contrast, the number of enquiries recei...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, then, whereas, while, in contrast, in general, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0234741784 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67905276604 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558685446009 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8780290969 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.888888889 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 5.23603664747 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26599171124 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110138170716 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102176926668 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184018792247 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11793753268 0.0819641961636 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.