There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need
music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the
International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
from the begin of the world, music is one of the part of human life. There are many type of music around the world. We know every culture has especial music. Music exist in every place. Even we can hear music from the nature such as sings of birds, or music of the oceans, even animals can sign.
We listen to music for some reasons. First of all, we listen to music for relaxation. During a day every person is under a lot of pressure and has a lot of stresses. When we listen to music feel more comfortable. Music can reduced our stresses. Secondly, music helps us to do our jobs, duties, home works better, because we do not attention to other voice around us anymore. Finally, music is an art. Everybody likes art and enjoy it.
We have a lot of kind of music in the world such as traditional music, pop music, rap music and so on. Old people of every country usually prefer to listen traditional music, meanwhile young people prefer international music. Traditional music is a part of country's culture. Consequently, it has some especial value rather than international music. Everybody can easily understand concept of her or his traditional music.
To sum up, whole people who live around the world with all different culture like music. Music is an international language. It means people around the world can communication with each other by music. In addition, Both type of music are important and we cannot ignore one of them.
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