Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today’s society with heavy workloads and high expectations from family leading to high stress. Therefore, it's of utmost importance to relax to get back to work hard again towards a better future. Some people prefer to relax by spending time alone, and some others prefer to have a relaxing day with their loved ones. In my view, I believe that the best way to relax is to do something you enjoy with people you love. I will explain my reasonings in the following essay.
First, when feeling down or stressed it's nice to invite friends to an outing and talk with them about the situation that causes stress. Friends have gone through the same things as their peers and may be familiar with the environment that is causing the stress. Hence have better understanding of the issues and obstacles their peers face and might even have solutions to each trouble. For example, whenever I was under a lot of pressure during my research for my Master’s thesis I would call and ask my friend that had the same advisor out. We would meet up in a cafe and talk about our situations and worries this always allowed me to calm down and feel better, to feel that I can raise up again and do well better.
Second, being around others allows us to distract ourselves from our troubles and have a good time, briefly relax and go back to work with renewed spirit. However, when alone us, humans tend to think of our problems and get absorbed by worries. Family and friends can let us take a breather and stop thinking about our troubles. For example, whenever I'm alone and trying to relax I inadvertently tend to think about how I am behind my projects or that I have yet to study for exams but whenever surrounded by friends I just live in the moment and let go of my worries.
I believe that it’s easier to relax, being surrounded by friends due to the fact that friends can understand our situation and bring us out of our inner world letting us relax and have fun without thinking about different issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...environment that is causing the stress. Hence have better understanding of the issues...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...out our troubles. For example, whenever Im alone and trying to relax I inadvertent...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...never surrounded by friends I just live in the moment and let go of my worries. I believe th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53038674033 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36481514306 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53591160221 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5588326166 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150435827117 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582577620744 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584036377657 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968689962093 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808359205314 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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