Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
One of the important things in life is family. Due to the huge demand in the current period of our life, some parents have to work long hours a day to provide the essential requirement of life for their childern and the cost of this is they will spend less time with them. I prefer to spend my free time with my children playing instead of doing homework. The bases of my view are communication and social.
First, playing with our young girls or boys at the communication level will enhance family relationships. Since play means spending more time with each other and exchanging ideas about the ways of winning the game. Thus, it will help in building effective discussion and will explore the thinking process of our childern. Hence,future interaction and connection will be stronger in solving proplems or discovering new solutions to help our families. this is best demonstrated by my personal exprience. When I retun to home after work, I usually set with my son and play the numbers game. Further, this game requires moving only one item to get more points and upgrade to the next level of the game. So, we try to figure out how to solve it. Consequentaly, our communication and brainstorming to get a solution is improved. The playing with my child is one of my best thing to do because it help us to establish a good analytic thinking as well as our relationships become stronger.
Second, on social point of veiw, the corner stone of the social interaction is the ablitiy to communicate with other people. Studies show that if childern for example used to communicate efficiently with their parents, they usually have the opportunity to be more socially effective. For instance, playing oftenly need two partner in order to be more joyful. Moreover, speeking about the way of playing and planning for approaching a game with team has big advantageous. Our children will be more open to new ideas and more interconnection with their friends, classmate, and future coworkers. If we play with our sons and girls we will directly influence their life by developing the love of sharing ideas and establishing ways to express their opinions.
On other hand, Doing schoolwork with our children is beneficial too. But our relationship with them will be more serious and lack fun times. Do you prefer to be very serious with your child? or do you want to build wonderful memories with them?
In conclusion, I prefer to spend my time off with my children playing and going to the gym. I feel this way because they will develop necessary skills in life such as strong family relationships as well as good social communication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2185.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8233995585 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80871225359 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509933774834 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5913649774 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0384615385 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4230769231 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24347434032 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697063111005 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608992743116 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145911346627 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395553087288 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.