Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Childhood obesity is one of the most concerned issues in each society. Some individuals attribute the ever-increasing cases of children getting obesity to the responsibility of the government. From my perspective, I do not agree with this opinion for the following reasons.
There is evidence to demonstrate that parents and a sedentary lifestyle assume main responsibilities for the excessive weight gain in children. To begin with, due to hectic schedule, parents nowadays do not have sufficient time to prepare home-cooked meals for their kids. As a result, children in this day and age tend to consume fast food or high fat content dishes on a regular basis without parents' consent and gain weight. Additionally, it is a fact that modern kids rarely engage in such physically demanding activities as doing sports or taking exercises although schools and gym centres offers them top-notch exercising facilities. They express a preference over sitiing in front of computer screens for hours and lying on bed binge-watching Netflix series. Therefore, the risks of neing diagnosed with obesity in children are higher. Indeed, I hold a firm belief that the increase in number of overweight kids is due to the lack of home-prepared meals and an inactive way of life.
Opponents may say that the government have to hold responsibility for the rise in obesity in children as they do not discuss over this issue frequently on periodic government sessions and do not pay much attention to solving this problem. Although it may be true to some extent, I have to argue that the governemnt always take a priority over children's health conditions and basic rights. Multitude of research and studies reporting the high rates of children getting obese are conducted and numerous warnings about the consequences of childhood obesity are given by the ministry of healthportal through television programs or direct messengers to residents. Obviously, the government care about the increasing cases of overweight children and take proper measures to warn the parents of the detrimental effects of childhood obesity but this issue is still common in society because parents do not take enough care of their kids and a sedentary lifestyle is gaining ground among children.
In conclusion, I hold a firm belief that children get obese because their parents do not prepare nutritious meals for them and they do not partake in outdoor activities. Therefore, parents and kids themselves are responsible for the rise in obesity in children, not the authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24509803922 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00041647756 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531862745098 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5431520712 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.75 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327823546383 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114181568045 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831725834779 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231494333596 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591178506854 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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