people should make decision or not

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people should make decision or not.

Every individual has the capacity to make a decision. Some people are not capable of making the decision, however, some feel no one should interfere in their life and they choose their decision by themselves. So, decision made by own or not is all persons own choice, and I believe, confidence and knowledge play its role. These are explained and elucidated below paragraphs.

To begin with, some people are very scared of taking a decision. They always depended on others for their decision. They ask friends and family members, and the most important reason why this happens is a person has low confidence in themselves or not in a state where they can reach a specific conclusion that is mental disturbances. The other reason person does not take a decision on their own is that they think if they fail in that decision, everyone will blame them, so put themselves safe they always ask other for their decision making. For example, one of my friends, who was studying in school and got failed for two years and by hook or crook passed in his last attempt. So, after that, she was scared to enter college because of failure but somewhere she wanted to go there, it's just she was scared, so she left this decision to her parents. Parents knew that studies are important and they enroll her in the college of her choice. Here, two things happen, first, the student will never get scolded if he again failed in the exam because the decision was not of the student. Second, the student was not confident in himself, Third, the girl's mental status was not that stable to make decisions. So. all these situations prove the cases where someone else makes a decision.

To move on to the other opinion which I prefer personally is to make a decision by yourself. It surely includes risk, bad decision-making, and fear of failure. However, these are also important in everyone's life to pass through each stage. I am not saying that we should not discuss with others, all I mean to say is to take everyone's opinion, make a list of pros and cons of whatever you are planning and then reach a conclusion. If we succeed on that, then congrats, and if not then also congrats, we learned a lesson in life. For me, life is nothing more than learning and enjoying, and we add the cherry on the cake when we achieve both by own effort. Let me illustrate this point when I was planning for an internship, I heard a lot of discussions, about where to do, some were saying Jodhpur is best, and somewhere saying Mumbai is best. In my perspective both are good, it depends more on what student wants to learn and what lifestyle they want to pursue. As I was living in Jodhpur for so long, this time I wanted to try a new place, also that place meets my criteria, better learning, sophistication, professionalism, good hygiene, and a good opportunity. So I pursued that and I never regretted that. It's not like I never made a bad decision, I did but I am proud that I am not dependent on others.

To put it in the nutshell, those who have courage and confidence in themselves should take decisions by themselves and those who are in doubt should let others make a decision for them for their mental peace.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, third, for example, i mean, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2622.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 574.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56794425087 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89472135074 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.573172501 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482578397213 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 820.8 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6954992036 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.846153846 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241751821849 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633772326923 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854156821614 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197448762812 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919131847443 0.0645574589148 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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