Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits
individuals rather than society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been some opinion that pupils are supposed to spend their money for the tuition. These people believe that higher education will bring more advantages for students themselves rather than for the community. However, i strongly disagree with them and i think that it's the government's responsibility to sponsor education fees for students in order to benefits both pupils and society.
When students have to pay fully for their university education it will definitely lower their learning opportunities, especially for those who are excellent and talented but got issues in terms of financial. If these students receive financial support from the government, they will be equipped with knowledge and skills which are useful and essential to the community. For instance, students involved in fields such as science, medicine or education will need an intensive training in order to meet the demand of society and funding from the government will be worth spending for long-term purposes.
Another thing is that if government do nothing to help the students on their tuition fees, that will put a great financial burden on them. That said, it is obvious that poor students will have to do part time jobs in order to save money for tuition fees. As a result, this will causes more concerns for students, lessen their time and efforts on studying and therefore lower their class performance.
To sum up, i am opposed to the belief that students should pay all cost for their university education. Instead, the government should provide financial support for them so as to benefit both individually and socially for a long-term period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ever, i strongly disagree with them and i think that its the governments responsi...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...gly disagree with them and i think that its the governments responsibility to spons...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ious that poor students will have to do part time jobs in order to save money for tuition...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...or tuition fees. As a result, this will causes more concerns for students, lessen thei...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... their class performance. To sum up, i am opposed to the belief that students ...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ould provide financial support for them so as to benefit both individually and socially ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, another thing, as to, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16853932584 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69339693925 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8907029382 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.454545455 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303115192563 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124365186251 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059415051711 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195798099193 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466096051688 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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