Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people argue that today’s life is much more complicated and stressful and they cite the over competitiveness of ours to excel in our respective life. I strongly disagree with this. I think that today’s life is much more easier and complicated compared to the time when our grandparents were children. I think that specially because of two reasons and I will explore them in the following passages.
First of all, heath is a crucial component of our life and no money or power can be good enough without good health. Today, the medical science is far more advanced than the old times and it has a significant role in our life. For example, now we can get tested for any kind of malfunctioning in our body or even can get vaccinated to avoid future fatalities and this has made our life much more easier. In absence of such advanced medical facility, people used to got die from such diseases, today which we treat normally or even without consulting a doctor. Knowledge and technical advances in today’s world has made that possible. So, in my opinion, life today is much more easier.
Second, today we have easy access of internet which was not that common during my grandparent times. It is very useful in a variety of things like learning, socializing, travel and in almost everything. Every information now is easily available through internet and a person from anywhere can easily access anything. My personal experience is the best example of this. During pandemic, I had to return back to my home where I was unable to complete my research paper. As I needed some tutorial on how to use a geospatial analysis software, the internet helps me not only in understanding the software manuals but also in completing my paper on time. Without internet, I would have failed to even complete my paper. Internet has a very positive impact on our lives and we use it in our daily life at any level from learning how to cook to a scientist working on climate modelling. Thus, I think that today life is much more easier.
To conclude, the issue of whether our life is easier or not is very complex and people are on both side of this. Some suggests that we should not be too much comfortable. Nevertheless, I still contends that our life is much more easier and comfortable compared to earlier time and we should enjoy it and respect it.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...this. I think that today’s life is much more easier and complicated compared to the time wh...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...me when our grandparents were children. I think that specially because of two rea...
^
Line 2, column 392, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...alities and this has made our life much more easier. In absence of such advanced medical fa...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 673, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
.... So, in my opinion, life today is much more easier. Second, today we have easy access o...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...mple of this. During pandemic, I had to return back to my home where I was unable to comple...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 920, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
.... Thus, I think that today life is much more easier. To conclude, the issue of whether o...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'contend'
Suggestion: contend
...much comfortable. Nevertheless, I still contends that our life is much more easier and c...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... I still contends that our life is much more easier and comfortable compared to earlier tim...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, thus, for example, i think, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67874396135 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67191796362 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514492753623 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2063327544 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0454545455 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.40909090909 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205225523449 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701233843283 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635841649639 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135738777165 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572990145369 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...this. I think that today’s life is much more easier and complicated compared to the time wh...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...me when our grandparents were children. I think that specially because of two rea...
^
Line 2, column 392, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...alities and this has made our life much more easier. In absence of such advanced medical fa...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 673, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
.... So, in my opinion, life today is much more easier. Second, today we have easy access o...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...mple of this. During pandemic, I had to return back to my home where I was unable to comple...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 920, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
.... Thus, I think that today life is much more easier. To conclude, the issue of whether o...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'contend'
Suggestion: contend
...much comfortable. Nevertheless, I still contends that our life is much more easier and c...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... I still contends that our life is much more easier and comfortable compared to earlier tim...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, thus, for example, i think, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67874396135 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67191796362 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514492753623 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2063327544 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0454545455 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.40909090909 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205225523449 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701233843283 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635841649639 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135738777165 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572990145369 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.