Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent times, many options could be faced by some people so that they have to choose the best one. Overall, I disagree with the statement that the public has many options today since every kind of lifestyle provides many facilities to respond to the customers' demands today whereas other people have one option only.
In my opinion, the choice of society's lifestyle depends on their need and ability since they have more money for a better life. For instance, a career woman in Surabaya, who spends her time for almost ten hours in the workplace to earn money, has more opportunities to select branded clothes, shoes and other kinds of stuff. Moreover, she could purchase anything she want without any consideration. However, it probably happens to the community in a suburb or an urban field.
The major reasons that must be considered are there are a lot of families in the rural areas who could not afford the ability as people do in an urban area. In addition, the difficult access of the population in a remote field may look like the main cause. For example, a farmer who lives in Pasuruan, East Java, spends more than six hours working and almost there is no choice for him except to explore nature optimally. In addition, he stays in a region with hard access to the city. Furthermore, he is only grateful for every kind of God's gifts. Although it is not going to be easy for him to have a wealthy family, he already understands the positive values of being a resident in the village.
In conclusion, the modern lifestyle makes folk confused to decide their good since the chance is available for them whereas other communities might be difficult to choose due to lack of facilities around them. Subsequently, the positive belief of folk contributes to their decision to behave properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77635782748 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54199085011 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58785942492 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.707703809 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121741167891 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377584890054 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536274002684 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073397082509 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789344749088 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.