In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Some people believe that buying a house is more beneficial than renting one, and there are various reasons to explain this popular conception. Personally, I believe that this is a positive trend in society’s mindsets.
There are two main reasons why owning a house is very important. Firstly, this is a one-time purchase, so when people have their own homes, a sense of security is created. From now they no longer have to be worried about housing rental fees every month, which is very annoying and doubles or even triples their monthly living expenses as well. For example, in the context of Covid-19, a lot of families lost their main income, leading to a lack of money. At that time, families who owned a home literally felt more secure than others, since they would still have had their house to survive even if the worst situation had occurred. Secondly, home ownership becomes a trend because people want to live in a place being exactly the same as their dream one. They aspire to have all the authority to build and decorate it as they like, without being hampered by others.
I believe mentioned situation should be considered positive. Because the desire of owning a home strongly motivates people, they try their best in both work and life, which makes them become a better version of themselves over time. Such an outstanding signal. Another reason is that houses have been seen as a lucrative form of investment, as real estate prices tend to increase in the long run. For instance, in the year 2000, my uncle spent two billion to buy a house, and after 20 years, he sold it for ten billion, as we can see, he made a profit of five times what he spent.
In conclusion, the main motivation behind home ownership stems from the desire of having a stable financial base and personal satisfaction. And I also think that this trend has brung us a lot of value in today’s world.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69461077844 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45053615962 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625748502994 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1068176665 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231875937091 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737192439472 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577044923027 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139466860328 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674248704651 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69461077844 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45053615962 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625748502994 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1068176665 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231875937091 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737192439472 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577044923027 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139466860328 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674248704651 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.