Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to solve this problem?
In recent years, global warming is one of the biggest threats to both the environment and humans. This essay will discuss the causes leading to the increase of global temperature and the measures that governments and individuals can take to address this phenomenon.
Human activities are major reasons resulting in this pressing environmental issue.More plants founded and the excessive burning of fossil fuels mean that more emissions are created. Along with the rapid development of the world, there is a growing number in the individual vehicles that produce an enormous amount of hazardous fumes into the air. Moreover, cutting down the trees which play a crucial part in reducing carbon dioxide also contributes to global warming. As a result, these above factors make heat stored in the atmosphere and then cause the earth's surface temperature to rise.
Governments and individuals must take drastic steps to tackle this issue. First, authorities could introduce laws to limit the emissions from the factories and encourage them to use alternative energy from solar, wind and water power. Furthermore, it is essential to fine people who deforest intentionally or illegally. Second, individuals should also take responsibility for the impact they have on the environment. Rather than using private means of transport, they could promote the use of public transports like buses or electric trains to decrease fumes dumped into the air. If possible, it is advisable for people to join hands to plant more trees and thus create dense forests - the so-called green lung of the earth.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are numerous reasons for global warming and national governments as well as individuals should make effort to solve this alarming problem.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: More
...ng in this pressing environmental issue.More plants founded and the excessive burnin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35357142857 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7856472861 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0203755619 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196622773432 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690615152016 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110660302549 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15839100745 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133208290171 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: More
...ng in this pressing environmental issue.More plants founded and the excessive burnin...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35357142857 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7856472861 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0203755619 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196622773432 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690615152016 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110660302549 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15839100745 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133208290171 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.