Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to solve this problem?
One of the most challenging environmental issues attracting attention worldwide is global warming. There are many causes for this phenomenon, but the most obvious one is human activity. However, this threat can be controlled to a certain extent by promoting an eco-friendly lifestyle among the community.
The main cause of global warming is obviously man-made due to human’s excessive exploitation of nature and inadequate measures in regenerating the environment. The most notable way that humans exploit the environment is how we harness energy from fossil fuel. The process to generate electricity from fossil fuel releases into the environment a large amount of CO2, which consequently leads to the greenhouse effect. Despite the negative impacts humans cause to nature, nature-protecting activities do not receive enough attention and investment from the public. There are still certain loopholes in environmental law, which causes many corporations and individuals to neglect protecting nature. And projects concerning improving the environment still mainly receive negligence from the public. For the reasons listed above, I believe human actions are the main cause of global warming.
Fortunately, there are a number of strategies that could be used to lessen the effects of global warming, and encouraging the community to live more sustainably is the most effective. By raising people’s awareness towards the negative state of the environment and the importance of protecting nature, each individual senses their responsibility in following a greener lifestyle. For instance, in Europe, the governments have created many educational programs to incentivize people on the environmental advantage of electric cars, causing a majority of their citizens to choose this type of vehicle. Consequently, there has been a decrease in the European emission rate. European is a strong proof showing that promoting an eco-friendly lifestyle is the key to global warming.
In conclusion, it is obvious that there are many causes for global warming and that action must be taken to address this issue. Since this process directly involves humans, humans should have endless efforts to protect the globe.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...how we harness energy from fossil fuel. The process to generate electricity from fo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, still, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64264264264 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09267614321 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564564564565 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0166646865 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.529411765 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208533858523 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673949847244 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545107274422 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137221500264 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308912270776 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...how we harness energy from fossil fuel. The process to generate electricity from fo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, still, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64264264264 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09267614321 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564564564565 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0166646865 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.529411765 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208533858523 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673949847244 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545107274422 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137221500264 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308912270776 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.