What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?
In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. However, in recent years, they have preferred living in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. As a consequence, the way people live has changed significantly.
From my viewpoint, living in a small village was beneficial. Firstly, villagers knew each other so they had a high level of trust, for that reason, most villages had a low crime rate. Secondly, when all individuals lived in a small village, they could work closely and help others. For example, if someone in the village is busy, they can ask their neighbors or friends to look after their child for a while. Living in small villages was simple, but everyone was always happy and carefree.
Besides, there were also some disadvantages when living in a small village. Living in a small village would make them cannot connect to other communities, and as a result, people in the village could lack of education and have limited experiences. When people could not connect to other communities, they would lose the chance to trade goods with others, and the worst thing was the village could not develop. One other thing was the problem of space to live, because of living in a small village, the space would be limited to live when there were too many people in one place.
In brief, living in a small had some advantages, even so, compared to nowadays, there were still disadvantages when living in a small village. Living in a small village was joyful but hard to grow when living in large cities was better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, while, even so, for example, in brief, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77090909091 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46830085097 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8987168628 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249243363681 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122363321512 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877103964878 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187442740667 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712438843403 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.