The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, social media appears all over the world because of the development of the society and most people used them to communicate and share the news. Due to the fact that, there is a two-way perspective for this issue. And I suppose that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay will go deep into the problem.
Now social media brings people a lot of benefits like if they are adults or they are teenager finished the high school, they can use social media for find jobs, people can use it to find place, search for information student can use it to find the idea or data for homework or with college students, they always use it to support themselves for their thesis or people can use social media for meeting people far away. So, in the overview, it can support people a lot. Example in 2020 the covid-19 pandemic explored, and people need stay at home, so at that time people used social media a lot to study online, meeting, talk to family members far away from home,…In Vietnam, the most popular apps, or webs to communicate are Discord, Zalo, messenger, Zoom and Google Meet. They are very popular because they work very good and easy to use and that is what people need when they can’t meet other outside.
In the other hand, social media make people can’t control their behavior and it will be very hard to stop going on Internet and because people use it so much so some people being very lazy and don’t usually go outside like at the past. In that case, people will stop face-to-face communication instead, they will chat and call video. And that will impact into people health and thinking way especially some kids don’t have enough knowledge, they can learn bad things form dirty contents videos from social media.
In conclusion, social media is a big development of people but everything have both good and bad sides, the important that people need to control their behaviors and need to know that social media just a support tool and they need to use it with a scientifically way.
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Message: You used an adverb ('scientifically') instead an adjective, or a noun ('way') instead of another adjective.
...pport tool and they need to use it with a scientifically way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i suppose, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67318435754 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35848329056 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502793296089 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.038679467 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.416666667 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252961156303 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977462177144 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583265757306 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1604880744 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170646224892 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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