The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Nowadays people are so impatient to become successful in their life by speeding up all their activities. Everyone is running in a race. If you can't run, you'll lose ultimately. The prompt says that this increasing pace of human life creates more problems than solving any of them. In my point of view, I mostly agree with the author's opinion for three reasons.
No doubt, in some phases of life, pace is indispensable. For instance, if any student do not pace up his or her studies with his or her peer group members, it is likely that he or she will gradually lag behind in the race. This is an example where pace in life is actually required.
There is always an other side of a coin. This increasing speed in life sometimes create many problems. People rush to make choice in their life about their career or life partner, and sometimes regret for choosing those. For instance, it is very common that many students do not know about their passion, some of them do not even try to find them. As a result, they just choose a major subject in their graduation life and after few years of studying they just can't cope up with the circumstances. They just want to get rid of the consequences of their choices. Sometimes, it gets very late to revise their decision, and thus they lose their interest in everything. This example illustrates the point that speeding up in choosing career path or life goals neglecting one's passion often creates major problems in life.
Additionally, sometimes people stores their uncompleted task for future, and when the deadline arises, they just drift through their unfinished works in short time. That might create health issues. For example, it is very common among students, that sometimes students take a break from their study and spends time in playing, gossiping, travelling and so on. After wasting time for so long, when the exam is impending, they jump into their study and try to cover the whole syllabus before the night of the test. This sometimes causes health issues, like they might feel dizziness at the time of the exam. The above example clearly agrees with the prompts that sometimes delaying pending task for future, and speeding up before the deadline causes more problems than solving.
To sum up, it's not possible to end up the discussion with concrete decision. For some instances speeding up in life is welcoming while sometimes it is not. Pacing in human life varies with merits and demerits in different stages of life differently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
.... Everyone is running in a race. If you cant run, youll lose ultimately. The prompt ...
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Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... is running in a race. If you cant run, youll lose ultimately. The prompt says that t...
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Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... point of view, I mostly agree with the authors opinion for three reasons. No doubt,...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
...s actually required. There is always an other side of a coin. This increasing speed i...
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Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d after few years of studying they just cant cope up with the circumstances. They ju...
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Line 5, column 731, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
... the point that speeding up in choosing career path or life goals neglecting ones pass...
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Line 5, column 768, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ng career path or life goals neglecting ones passion often creates major problems in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in short, no doubt, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80742459397 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47692827731 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522041763341 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9071219296 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.88 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.24 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194155340044 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616598877186 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934349300436 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124729907994 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551885565895 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.