studying abroad. share likes and dislikes as per experience.
Studying abroad is a great deal in itself. However, every aspect includes pros and cons so do shifting to abroad has. Such experience are very crucial in life , it gives different experience which give people different exposure and shows the reality of life.
To begin with, numerous things fascinate me to shift to abroad. These include a different experience which I was experiencing till now, self-dependency in many aspects like emotional, financial, and decision making. yes, moving abroad will make a good grasp on making a decision. See, this happens in a way, when we live with parents they do everything for us, manage for us, and we live a protected shield but when we move away from them, then we experience little things and this way develops ourself. So, I believe this exposure is very crucial in everyone's life for better development and growth. Another advantage of studying abroad includes, that it will lead to make us believe in many cultures, we understand the system of another country, we try to adopt that and these all small things will make a person versatile in nature. Students learn different languages, learn how to cook, do their daily chores, and earn for themselves. So, all the things pile up and make the student independent in every aspect and I believe after living in abroad for more than 2 years that person develops a totally different personality.
Furthermore, as I stated when there are cons, pros are inevitable. Shifting from HOME to a totally new environment needs a lot of courage and people are so brave nowadays that they make this decision to do better in life. However, it leads to consequences of emotional breakdown, students feel homesickness. This mostly happens because till now they lived in a totally different environment and sudden change takes time to adapt. Another thing which I don't like about shifting abroad is my culture, I am very attached to my culture And I am sure when I will shift to a new country I will not get the same experience over there. For example, for the preparation for medical, I shifted to a different state, it's not even a country but that led to a huge disturbance in my life. Everything there was so different from food, and language, to the way theY celebrate events. That was a really terrific state for me at that time. However, it took time after a few months I came over all those hustles and start enjoying my studies but that emotional attachment with my people won't get replaced and I missed my family there a lot. So, I believe students get adjusted at some points.
To sum up, as everything includes positive and negative aspects, we should always give more weight to positive things and cope with negative factors in such a way we grow more strongly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, another thing, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2287.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78451882845 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6661317987 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491631799163 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.0 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2805349013 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.954545455 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118704444057 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394067079662 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516619875716 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834722084954 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646952167376 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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