You are taking a course at a local college The deadline for your project was last week but you haven t finished it Write a letter to your lecturer In your letter introduce yourself explain why you haven t handed in the project yet request more time to do

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You are taking a course at a local college. The deadline for your project was last week but you haven't finished it.

Write a letter to your lecturer. In your letter

introduce yourself
explain why you haven't handed in the project yet
request more time to do it.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to request an extension for submission of my project as the last date of submission has passed a few days ago.

I am Steve, a student of semester one of your commerce class, having roll number 328. The topic of the project which I was given is Preparation of Balance-Sheet, which is one of the toughest assignments, but I put all efforts to get it completed on time.

I took two days leave in order to complete the task on time, but I met with an accident. Due to such uncertain circumstances, I could not complete the assignment on time.

However, if you grant me an extension, I will submit this at the earliest. I hereby request you to give me five more days so that I can work on it and hand over the project.

I will be waiting for a positive response from your side.

Yours sincerely

Steve

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...not complete the assignment on time. However, if you grant me an extension, I...
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...ork on it and hand over the project. I will be waiting for a positive respons...
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... a positive response from your side. Yours sincerely Steve
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5923566879 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70443489703 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662420382166 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0211586915 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1111111111 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255642213913 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914355443395 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498306290899 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110452032751 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515347561982 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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