The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of different factors that satisfy the surveyed people from two different age groups (under 30 and over 30).
Overall, achievement at work is the largest figure that people of both age groups think that they feel happier while other factors sector is the least source of happiness of them.
Achievement at work accounts for nearly a third of joy in both groups and the difference is only 1% (31% for the younger and 32% for the older). Similarly, doing hobbies is the second highest factor making people happy with 18% and 22% of people surveyed.
It is also noticed that while 18% of younger people feel happy with having a good appearance, 20% of people over 30 have a preference for financial security. Another difference between the two groups is that 15% of people under 30 prefer travelling, while 14% of older people feel joyous being with their family. Meanwhile, other factors sector witnesses 14% younger people choosing in the survey, in comparison with 10% in the older group.
- E mail has had a huge impact on proffessional and social communication but this impact has been negative as well as positive Do the disadvantages of using e mail outweigh the advantages 11
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'factors'' or 'factor's'?
Suggestion: factors'; factor's
...hink that they feel happier while other factors sector is the least source of happiness...
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Line 7, column 331, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'factors'' or 'factor's'?
Suggestion: factors'; factor's
...ing with their family. Meanwhile, other factors sector witnesses 14% younger people cho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, similarly, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43957841791 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 20.4939015319 44.8134815571 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.0 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253347518017 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1287566653 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539260255338 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16914017046 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381396485997 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.