All over the world, it ahs become more common for many people to try to avoid doctors and cure themselfs with self medicine. This may have several root causes and the consequenses are highly like to be serious. Expensive and outdated afcilities as well as misturb towards doctors are some of the main reasons and they may lead to the rise of privete and non-traditional medicine.
It is true that medical treatment at hospitals costs a fortune for the majority of generel public. Even though heakt care is free in many nations, medisine and drugs are far from cheap for ost people. Besides, in frastracturie in thre hospitals date back to several decades. As a result, many people make an effortnti=o find a solution at home and use various drugs without the prescriotions of professionals. Providing that, they have any side effect , they turn to private hospitals, which costs even more money.
Some people are not willing to see doctors because of stereotypes, which say doctors are not thust worthy jr charge to much money for the treatment. In my experiense, i have seen many people who are seriously ill but rejected visiting a hospitals due to their unfavorable experiense with medical proffesionals. This situations may cause an increased demand for witch doctors who use non-tradional methods to cure people.
To conclude, the reasons why paying a visit to a hospital is not appealing for people seem to be sensible, yet the effect of this situation can be detrimental. Seeking for treatment at home or from non-proffesionals can cause some serious health issues. In my opinion outhorieties and responsible organisations should try to regain the trust of the public.
All over the world, it ahs become more common for many people to try to avoid doctors and cure themselfs with self medicine. This may have several root causes and the consequenses are highly like to be serious. Expensive and outdated afcilities as well as misturb towards doctors are some of the main reasons and they may lead to the rise of privete and non-traditional medicine.
It is true that medical treatment at hospitals costs a fortune for the majority of generel public. Even though heakt care is free in many nations, medisine and drugs are far from cheap for ost people. Besides, in frastracturie in thre hospitals date back to several decades. As a result, many people make an effortnti=o find a solution at home and use various drugs without the prescriotions of professionals. Providing that, they have any side effect , they turn to private hospitals, which costs even more money.
Some people are not willing to see doctors because of stereotypes, which say doctors are not thust worthy jr charge to much money for the treatment. In my experiense, i have seen many people who are seriously ill but rejected visiting a hospitals due to their unfavorable experiense with medical proffesionals. This situations may cause an increased demand for witch doctors who use non-tradional methods to cure people.
To conclude, the reasons why paying a visit to a hospital is not appealing for people seem to be sensible, yet the effect of this situation can be detrimental. Seeking for treatment at home or from non-proffesionals can cause some serious health issues. In my opinion outhorieties and responsible organisations should try to regain the trust of the public.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... as well as misturb towards doctors are some of the main reasons and they may lead to the r...
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Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reasons and they may lead to the rise of privete and non-traditional medicine. ...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...roviding that, they have any side effect , they turn to private hospitals, which c...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... doctors are not thust worthy jr charge to much money for the treatment. In my exp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, may, so, thus, well, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03584229391 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95853788696 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594982078853 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6159085766 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43094828315 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13413292872 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153650138734 0.0667982634062 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273292760968 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.243529897739 0.056905535591 428% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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