students must made to follow same curriculum tiill they enter colleges
I believe that students are made to follow the same curriculum till 10th grade, atleast it used to be like this in my schools and the schools in my aquantance. Obviously this has its own pro and cons. The thing is that by the age of 16, children only follow what facinates them but doesnt know if in long term they will like it or no.Si I think if students are made to follow a perticular currliculum with mixed genres like science and commerce and arts. like little little from all the streams so they could persue their future in whatever they feel is understood by them. But to motivate this,Our system should try focusing less on the scores and more on how much the students are invoved in the subject.i feel that a student who have understood that he can be a very good CA doesnt need to know physics,chemistry and biology. A doctor doest need to know about CA stuffs in detail. But the general idea is one should know whom to reach out in somekind of problems. That is possible only when they have even slightiest knowledge about their problems. Suppose a child is made to lear music from a very early age and is prescienced to be one of the best musicians, But would it not be great if he knows little science behind the instrunments he plays or about budgeting and all.
The world is being very competative place and it is derwins theory that only the fittest survives. To be fittiest one has to try to touch as many things as he can. by touching I mean that having multi knowlege would make him suitable for the future world.
Students might regret their decisions as a kid. but i dont feel it is right that they should suffer all their life for the decisions they made as a kid.
Even when they have even the little some knowlege of other fileds, they understand that how beautiful are the other streams too.
Its is a scientific face that by the age of 16 a human learns the most. So why to limit their skies by making them field specific a so early age.To be a speaciliest, they have a long future to go.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to, i feel, i mean, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34656084656 5.05705443957 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38545869851 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497354497354 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1452213801 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6470588235 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182197298468 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523764363015 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607602557587 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084508752978 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678193733572 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 48.8420337079 153% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 12.1639044944 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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