The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The diagram briefly illustrates the production of manufacturing black tea.
Overall, the process consists of five main stages, commencing with harvesting tea leaves and ending at the firing step.
At the first stage, fresh tea leaves including only buds and two top leaves are collected by farmers with the aim of producing high quality tea. Afterwards, the leaves experience the withering stage on a rack. At that time, the air passing through them evaporates 60% of moisture.
Following that, there are two different methods employed to process the withered leaves.
One method is called a traditional one which produces loose leaf tea. The leaves are conventionally rolled until they become flat and broken. Simultaneously, a number of enzymes inside the leaves are disposed during this stage. Another one is a modern technique by which tea bags are made. The leaves are cut, torn and even curled in a quick process. As a consequence, there are some smaller granular pieces created at the same time.
What happens in the next step is that the rolled up leaves undergo an oxidation or fermentation. By doing that, they are spread on titles or cement. The enzymes with the air are released from the leaves, which results in these leaves shifting from green to copper. Finally, firing the leaves is implemented in ovens or hot dryers. This process causes a flavor and aroma to be brought out. At the end of the whole process, 97% moisture is discharged.
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- The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 56
- The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, finally, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01229508197 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65817473187 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614754098361 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1942371467 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.9444444444 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5555555556 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.72222222222 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139462292994 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449843276975 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521125535582 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985705240378 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492814923356 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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