Some people prefer to live in small family units, while others think it is better to live in large family groups.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are widely differing views on whether people should live in a conjugal family or extended family. This essay will closely scrutinize both viewpoints before concluding that I am in favor of the former.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that living with an extended family is advantageous to some extent. To begin with, living in a family which contains three or four generations, they could give each other a hand to do household chores, which enables them to have more time for relaxation after a long day of work, and therefore this allows each member to strengthen family bonds. In addition, nowadays, a number of young citizens get stuck in their lives. Thanks to the old who have practical skills and wealth of experience that could give them valuable life lessons. This allows them to overcome these difficulties.
On the other hand, the conjugal family can be advantageous in spectacular aspects. In the first place, by living in a small family, parents could allocate their budget effectively. If people live under the roof, the primary breadwinner has to spend a huge amount of time in the workplace addressing their financial burdens, such as rent or food. This has an advert impact on their living standards. Secondly, children could be given better education opportunities and proper vocational training, and therefore they can gain in-depth knowledge about their major that they are genuinely passionate about, which allows them to obtain handsome salaries.
in conclusion, although there are decided benefits to living with extended family in terms of family affection, I am of the opinion that the downside of this tendency, including conjugal family, is weightier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17454545455 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72349799381 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7787619 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256960018453 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898451686984 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652626809446 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159928674544 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145349190476 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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