Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don't know (for example, by giving clothing and food to people who need them) than they were in the past.
It is believed that helping people have got a major effect on our lives and society. Nowadayas more people are willing to help others and make an easier life for poor people. I personally think that more poeple try to help poor individuals than before. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, The industry has developed a lot in recent years and many people have a job with high income. Therefore, the number of people who are able to pay money and give some stuffs to the poor people, has increased. For example, when my grandparents got married, they established a charity in their city and a few of people gave clothing and food to that charity because most of people who lived at that time, was struggling with financial issues and only rich people had extra money to help others. However, in recent years many people even young university students help the charity. It shows that today people have got more money than the past.
Furthermore, new technology has been introduced to people and they can find news easily and quickly, so more people are aware of what is happening around them. As a result, many people can hear about that there are some individuals who need food or clothing. For example, my cousin is a doctor and lives in a small and poor city. She knows that people living there are not able to buy enough food for their families and also the do not have proper clothes for freezing winters. Therefore, she asked her friends and families who live in other cities to pay her money and help those helpless people. She could convince her family and friends by sending some short videos about the hardships in that poor city and the explained how those people needed help. Then, they believed that there are people how really need help and starter to pay money every month.
In conclusion, now days more people are willing to help people who need some stuffs because they earn more money than before and also they are more aware of other people living not near them and need help.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 378, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...othing and food to that charity because most of people who lived at that time, was struggling ...
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Line 6, column 426, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...enough food for their families and also the do not have proper clothes for freezing wi...
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Line 6, column 651, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nvince her family and friends by sending some short videos about the hardships in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, therefore, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61141304348 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17480790006 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502717391304 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1320528603 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8235294118 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467765728449 0.236089414692 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157737574082 0.076458572812 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913063741544 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32250478736 0.150856017488 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663688849833 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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