Today, children and teenagers are committing more crimes.
Why is this case?
How should they be punished ?
It is becoming increasingly common that young people are getting involved in criminal activities. This essay will elaborate on the reasons behind the movement and the punishments for young individuals, who commit law-breaking acts.
Shifts in material wealth and the prevalence of social media platforms can be attributable to the upsurge in juvenile delinquency. As the global economy has witnessed rapid growth in recent decades, many people have taken the advantage of the development to become richer. Meanwhile, the young and underprivileged, who are lack of education and capital, have failed to seize the opportunities, and maintain being impoverished. These people may feel desperate and finally take part in anti-social activities. Additionally, the popularity of social media is also a contributor to crimes among the youth. This is because young individuals tend to be prone to negative patterns of behaviors, which appear to be appealing and easy to imitate, are rife on the platforms.
To tackle the implications that young law-breakers have on society, several punishments for the individuals can be imposed. The first approach is that the young criminals can be banned from attending social events for days or months. This would reduce the risk that they re-offend the law, and increase their awareness of their acts. Another measure is that young people, who break the regulations can be imprisoned to experience the life of imprisoners. If immature law-offenders could live the life of former criminals, they would comprehend the consequences of law violation. Finally, these youngsters should be made watching educational videos about people, who are victims of crimes. The vivid images about those people not only discourage young criminals from recidivism but understand the impacts they have on their community.
In sum, online social platforms, and differences in monetery wealth are the main culprits of criminal acts among young individuals. By utilizing restriction to social occasions, imprisonment, and videos of crime victims, juvenile delinquents would feel the shamaness about themselves and the dire consequences they have on others.
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- In many countries more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and society Give reasons and make some suggestions 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56797583082 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09195277438 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574018126888 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9611693178 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.411764706 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64705882353 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143147109151 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457153097583 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033951289954 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844212879381 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250704918949 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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