You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter,
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbor to come
Dear Mr. Andrw,
I have just shifted into a new home which is next door to in last month were planning a party and inviting some friends as well as you.
I am an assistant professor of a university and just moved here with my 2 children and husband. In addition, due to two minutes walking distance of work place to my home, its convenience for me . However, bought a new home was my dream which I reached after a while. Now I have decided to doing a party with my friends and neighbors. In a party we are using heavy sound systems for dancing which can make some noise. DJ means playing songs with some heavy musical instruments which are bid noisy. I am worried about it and could you please allow me only one night for DJ party. Moreover, I also would like to invite you with whole family to my party which is held on 27th of march.
I would be very glad if you come to the party and do lots of fun with us.
Warm wishes
najam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...place to my home, its convenience for me . However, bought a new home was my dream...
^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... do lots of fun with us. Warm wishes najam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17032967033 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1732838815 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5089067066 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168653583354 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613519498579 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508237483372 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135843352253 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574701029914 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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