Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Globally, most nations will encounter remarkable problems Concerning their surroundings and the number of its Inhabitants as well as in the area of schooling. This essay will state the problems my country will have in the decade to come and how they will be solved.
Firstly, my country Nigeria will experience an increase in both noise and air pollution. This is because of the high rate of influx of people from rural to urban settlements, thereby increasing the number of automobiles on the roads, burning of fossil fuels for cooking, and overcrowding. Secondly, the crime rate will skyrocket. As a developing country that does not have many jobs to offer to its Increasing population, Inhabitants will resort to various forms of crime such as cybercrime, armed robbery, kidnapping, and what have you. Therefore, it is obvious that this problem and more will be on the increase unless action is taken.
For this problem to be eradicated or minimized, it requires the joint effort of government and individuals. On the part of the government, urbanization has to be halted by equitable distribution of resources also sensitization of people on the risk of fossil fuels and better alternatives for cooking. More so, the building of industries will go a long way in averting crime by providing work for the masses. On the other hand, people should strive to look out for causes of pollution in their locality and report to appropriate authorities and also take action on themselves to control it. Also, they need to focus on skill acquisition which will not only put food o in their table but be an avenue to create jobs for other people.
Conclusively, it is apparent In my country that unemployment and pollution will be on the increase in the decade to come due to alterations in numbers of people, environment, and school; however, government and individuals have to take measures to curb the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.003125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96030872282 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6794197031 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252479498253 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983985547188 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639790998699 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16476432159 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058441639161 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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