In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invent for the past 100 years? Why?
Over the past 100 years, human kind has progressed tremendously with the inventions like antibiotics, airplanes, computers and many more. From the era of wheels to the era of computers, we have come a long way. Although all three of the innovations have shaped our lives, in my view computer is the most important invent for the past 100 years. And this essay below will explain more about my opinion.
We are living in the age where technology is shaping our lives. We are surrounded by the machines around us for our needs. When we think about technology the first thing that comes to our mind is the image of a computer. According to me, amongst all the inventions so far, the computer is the most vital invention of mankind, almost everybody is dependent on computer directly or indirectly due to its uses in different fields of work such as offices, hospitals, commercial places, schools, colleges, banks, hotels, educational institutions, shops, training institutes, military establishments, military and industries, etc.
With the advent of the computer, we can accomplish a number of tasks with accuracy and precision within a short period of time which was not possible before. For instance, tasks like accessing, compiling and database analysis of a large group of people, takes merely a few minutes. In the education sector a computer plays a very significant role in terms of saving paper and acquiring information from the internet, students can use computers for different projects and smart class learning.
In conclusion, our inventions could not have been achieved without the computer, and it is still necessary for our future. As I mentioned above, most inventions could not have happened without computers. We need to use these for our creative activities like calculation, design and also communication. So the invention of the computer was the most important in the last 100 years.
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11858974359 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90573288737 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.6368451418 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.466666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252643728054 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855520668128 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994047409835 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152633761652 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796824065045 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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