The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Given is the bar chart, which was surveyed by a personal department at a major company, depicting factors having impacts on the 18 to 30 age group and the 45 to 60 age group’s work performance.
Perceptibly, while most factors were chosen higher by workers aged 18-20, the 45-60 counterparts said that competent boss and respect from colleagues affect them the most. According to the chart, team spirit and the environment of the workplace have the same responses by two groups of workers.
It is noticeable from the chance for personal development and the relaxed working environment‘s younger age group figure that it is distinctively higher than the other surveyed age group, with 90% and 42%, 80% and 30% respectively. Likewise, the safety of the job, job satisfaction, and money were more desirable for 18-30 to 45 to 60-year-old laborers, with 40%, 52%, and 72% compared to 24%,50%, and 70% in sequence.
Regarding the effect of competent boss, about 50% of 18-30 aged workers said it had an impact on their work performance, while the lower 2% were seen in the figure for another age group. Similarly, the percentage of the 45-60 workers who need the respect from colleagues to perform well at work was 45%, 3% higher than that of the 18 to 30-year-old segment. In addition, the figure for factors related to team spirit and work environment was similar in the two groups, which were 60% and 30% sequentially.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 45 to 60 age group’s work performance. Perceptibly, while most factors were cho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, regarding, similarly, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91701244813 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84068462904 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55601659751 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.8777832754 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.125 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.125 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374517640366 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174718199618 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101789681212 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259085653677 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963512236041 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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