Task 1: The chart below shows the annual rice production in 4 countries in 1995,2005,2015
Given is the bar chart elucidating the yearly rice yield in four different nations in a period of two decades from 1995 to 2015.
In general, while country A led the group in terms of rice production, the yield was relatively insignificant in the cases of country C and D. Also, throughout the surveyed period, different tendencies were recorded in the annual rice production of the four nations.
In 1995, the leading position was captured by nation A with roughly 45 million tonnes in rice production, followed by that of country B with about 10 million tonnes less. Meanwhile, 5 million tonnes and 2 million tonnes were respectively the amount of rice cultivated in country C and D in this same year.
The following decade witnessed a staggering rise in nation B’s rice production as its figure reached a pinnacle at 47 million tones, equalling that of country A at the top spot. The only nation which revealed no change in its rice yield was country D.
In the last year surveyed, there were mixed trends in the yearly rice production from the four nations. Specifically, as the continued growth in production secured country A’s first place at 50 million tonnes, the sudden drop kept nation B at the second place with about 8 million tonnes less. During the same period, country C and D tied at the bottom of the list with a similar 5 million tonnes in annual rice yield, being only a tenth of that of country A.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... change in its rice yield was country D. In the last year surveyed, there were mi...
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Line 5, column 460, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...being only a tenth of that of country A.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68924302789 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.623178488 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494023904382 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 346.5 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.7 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245430725074 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114041983051 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035612179946 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154374180182 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328017269506 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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