You are traveling next month to stay with a family toy do not know as part of a language training course Write a letter to the family to introduce yourself In your letter say when and how you will be arriving tell the family a little about yourself ask ab

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You are traveling next month to stay with a family toy do not know as part of a language training course.

Write a letter to the family to introduce yourself. In your letter,

say when and how you will be arriving
tell the family a little about yourself
ask about the type of food that the family eats

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Greene,

My name is Gabriel Brown and I am going to be your tenant for the next couple of months. I wanted to take this opportunity to introduce myself to your family.

Firstly, I have enrolled for a six month French course which is expected to commence on 5th of December. I wanted to attend the orientation day which is why I have booked my flight for 2nd of that month. I will be arriving late at night and I have already booked an Uber so as to not be a burden on you people.

Talking about myself, I hail from a small town and I love to explore new places and cultures. During my stay, I would mostly be out for my studies or roaming around the city, so, I would be out of your sight most of the time. I am ambivert by nature because of this it takes me some time to open up to people.

Lastly, I wanted to know about the type of food preferred by your family. Do you people eat a lot of meat? If so, I am fine with it but I would like to request you to inform me in advance so that I can arrange for my meal.

Hoping to meet the whole family soon.

Yours faithfully,
Mr. Brown

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...night and I have already booked an Uber so as to not be a burden on you people. Talki...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, so, as to, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.03587443946 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17837545717 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596412556054 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6920122548 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2857142857 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169627402743 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550001328824 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368186327364 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779447656367 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415123408917 0.0580467560999 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.86 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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