Sample DOL: Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activityDiscuss both views and give your own opinion.
Whether people should be able to freely choose the sports or activities they want to partake in has become a topic of discussion. While some people argue that dangerous sports should be restricted, I firmly believe that the decision should lie with the players.
On the one hand, it is true that dangerous sports can come with several risks to the participants. Players always face life-threatening perils once they decide to take part in extreme sports, especially those that involve highly specialized gears, namely skydiving, motor-racing, or mountain climbing. However experienced the participants are, though rare, chances are that the required equipment can malfunction, thus causing the participants fatal wounds or even deaths. For instance, in May, 2021, a first-time skydiver and his experienced instructor were hospitalized due to parachute malfunctions in McLaren Vale, Australia.
On the other hand, I firmly advocate for the idea that players should have the autonomy to partake in any sport. To start with, one’s well-being is first and foremost within their individual liberties, therefore, banning a person from chasing their passion is unreasonable, especially when they have fully acknowledged the threats that come with it. For adrenaline junkies, extreme sports give them pleasure. Preventing them from sports such as skydiving or snowboarding equals taking away their source of happiness. Moreover, in reality, the preparation for these dangerous sports is always painstaking in order to reduce the chance of mortality. For example, one would need to pass a skydiving certification course if they wish to skydive solo.
In conclusion, while extreme sports are dangerous in some ways, I am of the opinion that they can be beneficial to the players’ mental well-being and thus should not be prohibited.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 490, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'May 2021'.
Suggestion: May 2021
...wounds or even deaths. For instance, in May, 2021, a first-time skydiver and his experien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46643109541 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00288498505 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614840989399 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0586943089 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229283918336 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08747556937 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864749545907 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153482841299 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900433815453 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.