Some people believe that a country will benefit greatly if young people study abroad.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that since young generations are given opportunities to study overseas, they may bring great merits to their home country. I somewhat agree with this viewpoint because there are some problems for a nation, but various benefits stem from international students.
On the one hand, students who study abroad may bring certain issues to their country. The main reason is that a nation could be affected by brain drain, which is the most prevalent problem associated with oversea studies. These countries are likely to lose the talented, especially the developing ones. To illustrate, most people decide to emigrate to the country where they studied due to better living conditions and job opportunities compared with their own countries. That said, the loss of manpower is to blame for those people who avoid returning to their hometowns. Moreover, studying study outside of the country is considered a waste of money, which leads to financial issues for this country. One way of explaining this is that the government pays great emphasis on allocating great investment for international students through exchange programs, however, since they do not devote themselves to studying, they are more likely to spoil their nation’s finance.
On the other hand, a country will derive great benefits from international students for a combination of reasons. First and foremost, if students have a chance to access valuable knowledge from foreign countries, they will contribute to their domestic development. Those people, for instance, use the experiences accumulated from high-quality education in foreign countries to apply for various fields in their home country, thus leading to sustainable development. Another compelling reason is that students who live in foreign communities can take advantage to makes friends, of their opportunities to spread out the beauties of cultures, customs, and people in their nation. One such example of this is that Vietnamese students have a reputation for industriousness which is greatly respected by international citizens, paving the way for collaborative opportunities in future projects.
In conclusion, despite some minor issues associated with brain drain and financial resources, a country can benefit greatly from overseas students thanks to advanced knowledge and good impressions of people in other nations.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53867403315 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98723028299 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546961325967 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6754030156 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200309767424 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724714723246 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450798165339 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13737259601 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271053349087 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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