You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below gives information about the population of New Zealand between 2011 and 2012.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
Writing task 1
The given table illustrates the number of people living in New Zealand in different age groups and how it changed over a 10-year period starting from 2011.
Overall, it can be seen that while there was an upward trend in the figure for the population of the group of people aged over 40 years old and all ages from 2011 to 2012, the opposite was true for the remaining groups.
increase
As can be seen from the table, in 2011, the number of the 40-64-year-old group started at 1400000 people which is much higher than that of the under-65-year-old group with only 500000 people. From 2011 to 2012, the figure for the group of people aged from 40 to 64 years old witnessed a slight increase of 0.6 percent which is similar to the proportion change of all ages. The group of under-65-year-old people also followed the same trend with a much more significant growth of 4 percent.
In 2011, the number of people aged from 15 to 39 years old in New Zealand was 1520000 people nearly doubling that of under 15 years old people. In the next 10 years, these two groups both experienced a moderate decline of 0.2 percent in the figure for the population of this nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Increase
...ite was true for the remaining groups. increase As can be seen from the table, in 20...
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Line 6, column 492, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h more significant growth of 4 percent. In 2011, the number of people aged from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56398104265 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56361746334 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502369668246 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.4318314995 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.571428571 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1428571429 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0600470694107 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377972030318 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239497457729 0.0843802449381 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530205663751 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222550775569 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.87 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.