Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
some juveniles spend hours every day on their cell phones. this is because streaming videos and mobile games are engrossing for children. I think it will negatively affect their development because it will distract them from family activities.
First, minors love using mobile devices because streaming apps have many entertaining videos and use an algorithm to keep users interested. this means they have endless opportunities to enjoy themselves without thinking. For example, by scrolling down on the short video platform, the algorithm will introduce them to the following videos. On top of that, mobile games make games more accessible than console games. children can easily download the games from the app Store and become addicted to the fancy games. some of them would even pay all the allowances for the game costumes.
addicts to cell phones would rather spend more time on the screen than on outdoor activities such as biking, walking, and playing ball games. Prolonged screen time is harmful to physical health, especially eye health. Besides, it will lead to less time with parents and siblings. Hanging out with families or doing family activities can deepen family members' relationships. it's also an excellent way to accept essential things, such as values, social skills, and manners. The children paying more attention to the screen would construct unhealthy values from influencers' videos. For instance, one of the most popular YouTubers, Logan Paul, was famous for promoting drugs, suicides, and gambling.
In conclusion, smartphones have a toll on juveniles' growth, but it's hard for them to resist playing with phones. parents should limit their children's screen time and encourage them to participate in more physical activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40363636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62253173999 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9101326731 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.5555555556 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159255059671 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049715186102 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729162607626 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119925567808 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122857627859 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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