As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, many businesses have made money while also taking on social responsibilities. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement.
On the one hand, they make a lot of money for a variety of personal purposes. First and foremost, they require funds to maintain and run their business. Wages and bonuses, as well as periodic maintenance of technological equipment used in the production of goods, are examples of predictable payments. Furthermore, they must brace themselves for a slew of unexpected twists and turns in the future, particularly during the ongoing pandemic. Because the supply and demand market fluctuates unpredictably, businesses must create a backup source of money to reduce the risk of collapse and bankruptcy to the minimum extent possible.
On the other hand, they need to deduct part of the profits to contribute to the community. Unfortunately, the recent pandemic has claimed many parents' lives, leading to many school-age children being orphaned. Entrepreneurs need to create many charity activities to offer condolences to these young people in difficult circumstances, such as awarding scholarships for study fees and post-covid treatment fees, especially long-term psychological treatment, etc. In addition, to improve the quality of life of local people, businesses need to support the state in building necessary facilities such as hospitals, entertainment complexes, and maintaining damaged roads and bridges after using them for a long time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55263157895 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20410872344 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6455546322 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.090909091 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14235421288 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506549914055 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703746150943 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115375766333 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879098081242 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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