Growth of online shopping will close all the shops in the market. Do you agree or disagree?
Being often regarded as a leisure activity, vogue of shopping as a hobby has increased exponentially. Because of having busy schedule, people in recent times are more inclined towards purchasing everything like clothes, electronics, groceries etcetera from online applications or various websites of brands rather than physically paying a visit to the store. In this regard, it is deemed that the hype of online shopping would slowly shut all the stores and malls in the cities. I completely agree to this notion and would be elaborating my view in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, among multifarious reasons behind supporting the idea, first and the foremost is the convenience provided by it to the folks. Not only people could save their time by browsing the internet for searching the products but it also paves the way towards cost effective method of shopping. To be more precise, there is no iota of doubt that people nowadays have a hectic schedule and they do not get time to visit anywhere. Even if they try then also they cannot make it possible as timing of their office does not match with that of stores, so e-shopping proves to be blessing in disguise, as they can explore sites at anytime and anywhere even while travelling. Further, masses get many offers and discounts while purchasing the products, as these e-tailing market retailers usually sell things at lower prices as compared to stores which cost an arm and leg. Benefits like 10% discount, point collection, gift vouchers etcetera can be availed every-time. In an article published by Market research organization, 60% of the citezens of U.S.A. prefer to shop from internet, not only because it saves times but also cut the cost profoundly, Thus, it acts as icing on cake for people.
On the other hand , some sections of society oppose the view because according to them although one can get products at the door step in a short span of time, one cannot expect the same item as of the picture seen for reference, It is usually seen that product that arrives does not have same color, fabric quality as well as size, so this is the biggest issue of purchasing things from the internet and such kind of problems will never let e-shopping replace the shops, however I still believe that convenience of this novel approach of teleshopping would not let people pay visit to malls or shops because although one can see only the pictures and cannot try the item, one can read reviews of people over there along with photos uploaded by them following which one can set his/her mind and can order the product, for example, applications like Amazon, flipkart and Myntra encourage people to submit their feedback about their experience, which further acts as guidance for other coustomers to have trust on these e-sotres. Therefore, trend of online shopping would mushroom and inverse would be the case of other shops in the market.
To conclude, I would like to say that benefits like time saving method, being cost-effective way and facility of reading feedback of people would lure more and more people to purchase online and this way the trend of physically going to the shops would totally come to an end.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2655.0 1615.20841683 164% => OK
No of words: 542.0 315.596192385 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89852398524 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55634588954 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 176.041082164 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531365313653 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 837.0 506.74238477 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 229.842015395 49.4020404114 465% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.642857143 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.7142857143 20.7667163134 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153476522062 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641968544568 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067776605974 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981318653174 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330650822967 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 78.4519038076 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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