SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT PROFESSIONALS SUCH AS DOCTORS ENGINEERS SHOULD BE REQUIRE TO WORK IN THEIR COUNTRY WHERE THEY DID THEIR TRANIING. OTHERS BELIVE THEY SHOULD BE FREE TO WORK IN ANOTHER COUNTRY IF THEY WISH
DISCUSS BOTH THE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION
According to the given paragraph, some people believe that people that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be require to work in their country where they did their training. While others believe that they should be free to work in another country if they wish. I believe that professionals can work in another country if they want to. The country in which they trained may does not pay them enough and the country may does not possess the assets and technology that contributes in development of their sector.
In some countries the professional like engineers does not get paid enough for their hard work. The government in that country would not treat them fairly for their contribution to the nation. In such cases the white-collars can choose to work in other countries. The pay here not only refers income but also the respect that white color should be getting for their contribution. The political leaders in some nations suppress the white-collars and does not give them enough credit. According to the recent survey conducted by "UNO" it stated that the reason for professionals working in other countries are due to their nations lack of attention towards them.
Some nations are still not being acquaintance to the technology has become difficult for the white-collars and trainees to improve their knowledge in the field they are in. To the problems they find it difficult to get the solution in their nation due to their lack of equipment . In such cases they should be free to work in other countries.
In conclusion I think that people who wish to work in another country if they wish, are should not be criticize by the public while the professionals who work in the country where they trained should be getting paid enough income and respect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'required'?
Suggestion: required
...such as doctors and engineers should be require to work in their country where they did...
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Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
...doctors and engineers should be require to work in their country where they did their t...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ir nation due to their lack of equipment . In such cases they should be free to wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, while, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95681063123 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72042791455 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421926910299 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5382754557 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.571428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.602250938416 0.244688304435 246% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.25253219007 0.084324248473 299% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177878446656 0.0667982634062 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.42022546954 0.151304729494 278% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154082928614 0.056905535591 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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