As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree
or disagree?
In developed societies such as today, some argue that as well as earning money, businesses should have social responsibilities. In my opinion, I strongly agree with that idea.
First of all, the responsibilities companies are engaged in contributing to developing a sustainable economy, by obeying obligations for the conservation environment, gender equality, labour safety, Labour rights, fairing salary, training and developing employees, and growing communities.
However, businesses also deal with problems such as competing markets, economic crisis, etc. If a company is profitable then they meet a company’s needs and bear the company’s employee’s wages. Additionally, businesses have to invest to remain profitable business and higher reputation. A company is not able to pay its bills as any interest in social responsibilities becomes correlated. Hence, to be liabilitable, businesses need to have a stable position in the market. For example, a big company will take care much more of their staff by providing a “living wage” to help them have a good quality of life.
In conclusion, it is recommended that businesses take social responsibility, helping to grow up for aspect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63535911602 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46359050763 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685082872928 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6607654834 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237397082702 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091511552129 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660947274759 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133015750206 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806478111288 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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