The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared
Bar chart show the factors of reason why adult person participate at education and share cost of each when people take a study.
Many reasons of people taken a study adult by survey chart. The most choice which reason of take study is in subject because it is important to people to enjoy the material which learn. When someone participate with feeling happy, the lesson will be easy understand. The percentages of interest subject is 40%. Secondly the lowest of survey chart was to meet people. That reason in unreasonable because it is not related of studying rather than other choice of interest subject, gain qualification and etc.
The next of survey is pie chart which represent divide of cost when people take a course. The highest of consideration of course is individual (40%) when person join a class, they must reduce consumption individual because taxpayer and employer are fixed cost and cant minimize that costs.
- You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country Write a letter to your manager In your letter explain why you want to work in the company s head office for six months say how your work 73
- some people like to try new things for example places to visit and types of food Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with 56
- during a recent job plane journey you sat next to businessman who owns a chain of restaurants you talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one oh his restaurant write a letter to this businessman in your letter re 73
- You recently organised an all day meeting for your company which took place in a local hotel In their feedback participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch Write a letter to the 56
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema Discuss both views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and inc 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'participates'.
Suggestion: participates
... the material which learn. When someone participate with feeling happy, the lesson will be ...
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Line 2, column 498, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...of interest subject, gain qualification and etc. The next of survey is pie chart which ...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... they must reduce consumption individual because taxpayer and employer are fixed ...
^^
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...axpayer and employer are fixed cost and cant minimize that costs.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, as to, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95512820513 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57442633225 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0578839775 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325333048718 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136482831793 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146583881332 0.0603063233224 243% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236569326358 0.12726935374 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126070696381 0.0580467560999 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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